Ang Ulan
(Kag ang Akon Dughan)
Ang ulan gulpi
lang gabundak,
(daw malusod ang amon atop)
kag gulpi man gauntat.
May low presyor ereya abi
malapit sa amon.
Ang akon luha, daw ulan, gulpi
lang gabundak,
(daw malusod ang akon dughan)
kag gulpi man gauntat.
May low presyor ereya man abi
Sa akon kabuhi.
12 Agusto 2001 3:30 hapon
Pilar, Capiz 
Wow, Fen. Salamat. I concede. Indi ako kahibalo sang grammar kag spelling sang Hiligaynon. Apang, I am working on them.
I just don’t think there is such thing as “law-ay nga binalaybay”. I think yours was law-ay nga interpretation. I do believe that anything that one say out of his heart, with passion and compassion is an art.. and for me.. it is beautiful, even if it is out in terms of grammar and composition.. you don’t have to know grammar and composition in order to be a writer… you just need a pen, a paper, and a heart full of passion…
I just don’t think there is such thing as “law-ay nga binalaybay”. I think yours was law-ay nga interpretation. I do believe that anything that one say out of his heart, with passion and compassion is an art.. and for me.. it is beautiful, even if it is out in term of grammar and composition.. you don’t have to know grammar and composition in order to be a writer… you just need a pen, a paper, and a heart full of passion…
Law-ay ni sia abi nga binalaybay ano pa indi mo maintindihan.
ANU MAN NI MAN LA KO NA INTINDHAN